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Okay, I've evaluated tha shit.
Streetz some of your shit was good but most just sounded stupid!!ex. "you could touch all the people in china..and you still coudn't be sick.."It sounds like your saying he's immune to shit, be more specific, make sure it says what u want it to say so other people can get it!!! Tha flows OK but punches were weak.
DON's shit was good.It sounded intelligent,using personification and other poetic devices really helps flow was good, punches were better.Streetz I'm not jokin' when I say to get an english book and study the poems in it, you'd get better!!!!
Vote: Tha DON
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