View Single Post
Old 06-14-04, 01:27 AM   #8
PLOTT
New to RB
 
Posts: 14
IP:

POISON-
star thinks he's hot, i dunno who sparked his flame,
they need to tell em tha truth he aint even hot as his name//
WEAK- 2
i bet chu was raised by wemon, gay uncles an hermaphrodites,
if all da lyricists in tha world taught u how to spit u still wouldnt be tight//
MORE WEAKNESS- 2
ima bout to end yo stardom an wipe tha tears from ya face,
take ya fathers roll an say stay in a childs place//
ALMOST PUNCHED- 2.5
ya like my student an im tha teacher givin a lesson,
star don fuck wit poison or you will need a spiritual blessin//
WEAK-2
tha bottom line is, ya thought this battle would be easy,
ya like a blind kid cuz youll neva be able to see me//
WEAK-2
POOR VERSE- ELEVATE MAN.

STAR-
+I do this ‘dude’ bad, treat him like he had ‘detention’/
Treat him so ‘rude’, you wouldn’t wanna ‘mention’+
WEAK- 2
+Don’t take ‘long’ for me to get in his ‘mind’/
So he wanna ‘prolong’ the battle, cuz he know the win ‘mine’+
ALMOST A PUNCH- 2.5
+’Cold-hearted’, I’ll leave you in a puddle of blood’/
‘Retarded’, you’ll try to play in it like was ‘mud’+
MEH, WEAK- 3
+Stop trying to touch the ‘crown’ of being on my level/
But you gone be ‘drowned’ to reach yo level+ (ha)
BETTER- 3.5
+I ain’t gotta spit ‘flames’ against ‘lames’ to show my ‘name’
I’m the one to play the ‘games’, cause ‘shame’, bury ya ‘fame’+
MEH- THATS A POOR MULTIE FLOW- 3
STAR TAKES THIS.
POOR BATTLE