Restricted: Once again you dropped some nice shit, an overall tight verse. U stayed true to the topic all the way through as usual, i do think that ure rhyme scheme was a little too basic cuz u have done a lot better in the past. ure flow was tight, it all went well together from start to finish and there was a lot of thought into it clearly. i do think u cud have done better and the rhyme scheme was about the only thing that needed work.

DV: for ure first topical u dropped some hot shit. ure verse flowed great, a little better than restricted mainly cuz ure lines weren't as stretched. u stayed on the topic all the way through to which is gud. ure rhyme scheme like restricted's was pretty basic but i thought u edged it just slightly. i think that if restricted would have thought more about it and done a better rhyme scheme like he can he wud have beat u. but u got him this time with an overall better flowing verse and slightly more complex rhyme scheme.

V/ - DV

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