gavins structure was fucked up but he had some metas
gotta give him some credit
your flow ws off because of your fucked up structure
and his first line about the zoo and shit was played
no orginality there
your wordplay.......dont know im not reading it again
punches and personals.......... weak
need to elevate

the star
*props* good verse man
you had a ok structure
you had some extended lines but nothin to mess you up
your was flow wasnt bad
punches and personals hit alot harder
you had the better metas and wordplay so keep it up

v/star