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Old 06-14-04, 07:30 PM   #23
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I Strive For The Worlds Acceptance But Get Declined..
I Struggle To Survive In Life, Collect Every Nickle and Dime..
NICE OPENER BIG UP! 8/10
I Ask For Perservance and The Assistance Of Higher Class..
But It's Like Swallowing Glass To Stay In Middle Class..
WHOA NICE ONE IT WAS STRAIGHT 8.5/10
Once A Teenage Dream, Football Star, HighsMen Trophy..
But Credit Cards, No College, The Debt Is Choking Me..
NICE FELT THE EMOTION COMING THROUGH IT 9/10
No Future It Seems For My Non-Educated Lazy Ass..
I Dipict Loyality To Those Who Have The Needs To Last..
IT WAS GOOD BUT NOT AS GOOD AS THE FIRST 2 BARS 8/10
I Fight For Food, Shelter, and The Torn Clothes On My Back..
I Don't Know Why I Live, For My Dreams Seem To Be Off Track..
WOW THIS IMPRESSED ME EVEN MORE HEARTFILLED 8.5/10
My Reality Can't Be Real, These Demons Have To Be Fiction..
They Curse Me, I Do What I Must To Stay Warm, Create Friction..
NICE LIKE THE AS REST 8/10
Rub My Hands Together To Keep My Low-Blood Circulating..
Why The Fuck You Hating? Can't You See I'm Trying To Make It..
FEELING YOU ON THIS HAPPENS TO MOST OF US 10/10
Low Standards? Who You Think You Are To Make Those Judgements..
I Live The Same Way You Do Just Diffrent Concepts Of Budgets..
AIGHT GOOD ON LOVING THIS 8.5/10
I May Creep Threw The Streets In A Mis-Draught Form..But..
We Were All Brought Into This World From The Womb Being Born..
UNDERSTAND THIS PERFECTLY.....9/10
You Believe In Your Heart That Your Suit Makes You Better?..
You Cold-Hearted Bastard..I Don't Need Charity Fuck Ya Chedda..
YEP WE CAN MAKE IT NO MATTER WHAT NEED NOT NO ONE 10/10
I May Be At The Bottom of Bottoms and I Can't Sink Any Further..
Just Maybe I Can Suceed If I Take My Brain and Heart and Merge'm..
^^^^NICE CLOSER TO END A GREAT DROP 8/10

8.6/10


DeadlyVisions


Reminisce on the deceased, wondering about having peace..
Lost lives on the streets, motionless bodies on concrete..
NICE OPENER REALLY FEELING IT 8,5/10
From my first breath all my steps were already planned and known..
On this Earth I am not free to roam but confined within extremist zones..
STR8 BAR HOMIE FEELING IT 8.5/10
What do you do when someone has a gun, best move is to run..
Don't defend, you'll be a lost son, we don't want to lose another one..
I DISAGREE WITH THE BAR DEFEND IF YOU DIE THAN THATS IT WE ALL DIE ONE DAY 7.5/10
Brings to mind Big, Pac and Biggie, all of a sudden the fun is done..
But now our lives turned glummy, after hearing news of a fallen buddy..
YEP I WOULD BE WEEPING IF ONE OF MY HOMIEZ DIE 10/10
It's so hard to suceed in survival, almost impossible to turn a smile..
Only the fittest survive! every ssecond of life is worth a while..
WORD I AGREE 9/10
It hurts a whole damn lot, nobody helps including the cops..
This needs to stop, depressing witnessing another brother drop..
UMM....NOTHING DIFFERENT OR CREATIVE HERE SORRY 7.5/10
I Guess all of these crimes is stressing, terribly depressing..
Jfk Shooting, Nobody confessing, either way they were messing..
NICE BAR FEELING IT A LOT 9.5/10
This pain needs to end quick, this shit is beginning to make me sick..
It's just un-believable like a flick, anybody can solve the trick..
UMMM OK NOT UNDERSTANDING THIS ONE WELL.....8/10
You Know what is worse, that we all came from mother earth..
It seems like we were cursed, to seeing murders since birth..
NICE NICE NICE ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!10/10
What is all this worth?, just a struggle, hard to remain humble...
Our lives are ready to crumble, starting to tumble in this trouble..
NICE AGAIN BUT NOT AS GOOD AS THE LAST 8/10
Eventually I am not afraid to be freed from this evil existence..
Death doesn’t scare me, cuz paradise awaits in the distance..
ITS OK BUT YOU SAID TO RUN NOT DEFEND ON ANOTHER BAR SO IT SCREWS IT UP FOR ME BECAUSE IT MEANT SAVE YOURSELF AND NOW YOU SAY DEATH DON'T SCARE ME BLAH! 7/10
So we only have memories today, of people who paved the way..
People like our close ones I'd say, only move left is to pray..
NICE CLOSER FEELING IT A LOT 8.5/10

wow I averaged what I gave you and you got a 8.5/10

REALLY REALLY CLOSE BATTLE SERIOUSLY KEEP DROPPING

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