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Old 06-14-04, 08:34 PM   #25
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aight im gonna have to give this to DV

DV: you was just more better it was fun reading on you grabbed my attention and it made me want to keep reading ..your flow didnt get boring to read and it was hot.....your ending was killayou could have used a lil mo met4s and and things in that nature but good topical...good for your first topical i cant wait to read another topicasl battle by you.....all in all 8/10

R.: you was also good just not good enuf..you had my attention for awhile then i got a lil bored and wasnt really interested in it any more kinda boring could have used some questions so that i coudl stay into it and want to read in to more but goood drop it flowed pretty good....nive vocab also...all in all 7/10

vote=DV
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