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Old 06-14-04, 10:14 PM   #5
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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killa= Ima give this one to you cuz ya punches stood out to me. You can work on ya structure though cuz ya lines are strectched out. Try to use betta wordplay too.

Reddot= I aint give this to you cuz ya punches really didnt do nothing special.
Bitch you called me out thinking I was scared
You couldn’t beat me nigga if your lines was squared
^^^^^^^^ I didnt understand that one. So work on ya punches and maybe you could have wont this one.
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