Man is u serious, Lil Shit

U need to scrap the rhymes youve been workin wit and start over baby. U had no rhyme structure whatsoever. Weak punches, ridin G-Unit Dick, this rhyme is all u baby. No disrespect though.
It ain't tha same when I drop ur ass
I'm on top, u gotta find me
Shit jus didnt make sense. dont know what u were going for here.
G-Unit tha best kind, they're off tha chain all tha time
They're tha best in tha game
Ride that G-Unit Dick kid.
So don't go insane, cuz I tapped ur cab.
Mighta add that tha dope was great
Who's dope, what dope, I got lost.