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Old 06-15-04, 04:09 AM   #6
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bigpimpin

punches were weak
structure was..umm..
flow..... ok i guess
elevate alot
and get some wordplay, vocab
or somethin
i was not feelin your verse

hoppa
structure not good but not bad either
your punches hit
your flow was off cuz of your extended lines
basic verse not the best but you still won
elevate

vote/hoppa