Rush stay in front lines not hate but we out of your range level
Murked this Hebish bitch so much he had to sell his soul to the devil
6...weak opener, basic wordplay and not a gud punch!!
Kid you want to battle so bad in elevated, Slow the hell down let us Be
You got murked so much he put toys all over his post like if this was toy story 3
6...another pretty weak punch!!
Herb couldnt beat nobody so he couldnt do nothing but find lines and feed
Rush you wouldnt be rushin for victory even if you had aol top speed
6...first line played, second line was aight!!
LOL you cant be joking, If I was you I would go ahead and choose your fate
Even noobs murked him to much he has to hide his identity from his old name spiky2k8
7...funny line, better punch!!
Sorry if ya left down hearted but I have 20$ can I buy some beans(You farmer)
Spiky already knows Im tight, tighter then you and tighter the Beyonce's Jeans
5...weak closer, second line was pure filler!!


u call yoself rated and yo ass being tailgated/
yo lyrics are so serious but mostly sound like 12yr old gurl on her perion/
what yo named suppose to mean rated mo like u was hated and then fated/
ur illiterate not even understanding what u sayn so please stop playn lil game/
i'm tha name on this site that people dont fuckn like/
cause rhymes are same and very much tha same when i came...Dame/
i'm not speakn gibberrish cause my rhyme make sense fo god's sake u cake/
u dont get my raps cause u had a overlaps was looking at tha first line so i had to spear u my time/
i did this so fast i made u lick my ass and call a CAB cause u payn my TAB/
tick tock tha clock just tha clock just stopped so get back on my cock/

Ok i was gonna do a line for line breakdown for u to but lookin at ure verse i can't. i mean u half the time u can't really tell which lines are supposed to rhyme with each other. ure structure is fuckin wack as fuck and ure flow is utter shit to. u need to elevate hella lot cuz ure punches are all weak and personals just arent there. no hate, just givin sum helpful criticism!!

V/ - Rated, for overall better verse, one that i cud actually understand the rhyming of!!!

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