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Old 06-15-04, 08:00 AM   #12
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for enygma:

flow:kinda off in some spots i thought wasn't workin as well as i've seen in past weeks 5.5/10

volcab: alright nothing really to say here 6/10

punches:a couple of alright lines not too bad on trying with the personals my fav line,"You shouldn't get your hopes up.....shit, I like your confidenceBut I'm ripping this pussy........like a clumsy Gynocologist" alright job 6.5/10

overall:18/30

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow:alot clearer then enygma i thought good job 7/10

volcab:nothing overly special here workin alright though 6/10

punches:some good lines my fav,"Nothin Personal, Just Business!!Ur rhymes are weak & ugly, Like his mugshot wit his transexual Wife.. " good close, both of you did well on the personals 6.5/10

overall:19.5/30

vote--close battle but i'm voting for deadly visions
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league