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Old 06-15-04, 10:20 AM   #15
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everyone is pretty much sayin the same thing about complex's verse...that its too simple...but 2 of the people who voted their rhymes are simple too lol...anyways...complex you had an ok verse but u cant beat restricted with it... you had 3 ok bars...your opener was decent...and your 3rd and 4th bars were good...you need to focus more on harder punches...your structure was really good tho...and consistent flow...no multies...wordplay...decent meta's....decent verse

restricted you came pretty weak here...i seen much much hotter form you....it was a good verse but not soemething i expected from you...that was like a big kountry rhyme... anyways good punches not too hard but better than complex's....good multies and wordplay decent structure consistent flow....and i think your closer was weak...just horrible lol

vote: ~R~

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