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Old 06-15-04, 12:54 PM   #14
JSmoove
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Posts: 87
From: Texas
IP:

Aight...

Smokescreen: Your flow was aight! Structure ok. You had some nice punches. I especially liked your opener...your closer was kinda weak. That line with the Huxtable was really original. I also liked that verse on the "special rime".

UndestrucT: You should have came harder...you know you didn't drop a nice rime. Your structure was ok. Your opener was weaker than your close. That's were you set your precedent. I wasn't feeling ya after the opener. You had a couple of nice punches though. That minus 10 spit was the best in your verses. The rest was simple...nothing complex at all.

Close battle, but my vote goes to...

Vote: Smoke