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Old 06-16-04, 12:45 AM   #6
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magnet your verse was pretty weak...you talked about yourself moree than your opponent and thats the first reason you lost...you also lost cuz your verse was way too simplistic...that was a rap from someone with a mindstate of a 5 year old it was pretty weak...you didnt have any hard punches and no personals your verse was just bad and you need to elevate in all areas

overall : 3/10

killacam... i think your opener and closer was the hottest bars in this battle...canibus line was good,....your 2nd bar didnt rhyme tho ....bricks...packs...dont think it rhymes...u had a couple hard punches no personals decent structure and flow nice verse overall

overall : 7/10

vote: killacamflow

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