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Old 06-16-04, 04:14 AM   #9
Terumoto
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for gods sake drop it man, its so boring and played just stop it...
from what the cat dropped maybe he does work at a post office..
you dont pack no nine millimetre, maybe id believe if i could actually see-ya
you talk the talk, im not hardcore but you aint hardcore either
trying to reach-ya, spit knowledge, im not a rapper im a teacher
stop talking black, right now you rap fiction, try to rap realer
this cats a meterial indivudual, want respect try spitting shit thats true
hard on net but in physical ways, ill bring out the bitch in you
in the middle-you are a sorry kid that in your child days was ridiculed
older now you think rap is cool, so you come to the net lyric school
attention seeker but no-one will give it to you, how do i know this?
after 2 years of rapping when someone dropping, this is what you notice
you detect, through aspects of the rhyme, the time the cat started
the time rap elevated, the packed vocab, and if they come across retarded
its usually because theyre star-hit, heard 50, fab and em and they heart-lit
"i wanna do that too" but they copy cos the rap game is one of the hardest
when you know how to do it it works, if you dont youll lose it, it only gets worse
this guys an example, look the the flow and vocab he used in his verse


dammit gangsta schemes piss me off.........................................argh..

peace
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