all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//
aight.....no punch
I guess I'm the one merking the other cat to me you can't compare//
have two extra legs just to runaway from this battle like a chair//
aight......
battling cats not on your level is all you be doing on this site//
blah! the only way you elevate is flying a plane at full flight//
ok...nice punch
you probably be listening to Cass & Banks to see what to bite//
you fake emcees just go red instead of green like a traffic light//
ha ha ok
you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//
alright......ok closer

7/10
you had some punches no personals but you came harder than the next
verse im about to break down

Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/
ok.....NO
Well ur not, u dont have good rhymes, ur wack/
And im gonna prove that/
no punch....
Im sitting in front of my pc trying to think that ur not gonna beat me/
which u wont, im really not worried about that/
ok.....wheres the punch
Your not immortal im gonna make sure of it/
im about to tk ur ass back into the past where u belong/
this line didnt even ryhme.....
you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/
ok again....NO

elevate kid...thats all i got to say..work on your punches and personals
3.5/10


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