Nice linez, not very deep on emotionz but then, I took it as if we were having a 'casual' conversation during the day. Got a little 'loose' about 3/4 thru but seemed 2 hook bak up b4 end.... As you said tho...
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Upppin 4 FeedBack.. I Know It Wasnt.. Nothing Great.. Just A Quiccky' ... So Holla Back.. And Tell Me What I Could Work On'..!!
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So, I say it was a pretty good 'Quikie' that can now b 'cleaned up'. <G>

......Teazer.....



BTW, how about a favor on a serious one as I REALLY need to reach out to someone and could use some op's on my thoughtz/wordz. Appreciate even more if you ask for ur crew's review too. Thankz

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129756