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Old 06-17-04, 12:02 AM   #36
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killah bwoy:

Only Time Your "raps are gifted" Is when christmas comes around-
Thinkin You King..Lookin' like an Old Bitch rockin' a burger king crown-
^^lol funny opener but not too good of a punch 6/10
perked up lookin all gangsta but he really a punk..looks are deceiving-
Tryin to catch a football..Losses are the only thing you "receiving"-
^^played concept but still decent 5/10
battlin me was the biggest mistake since enygma let you in sindicate-
the M-stands for Masterbation,standin there with a bottle of lubricant-
^^lmao funny shyt nice punch/personal 8/10
You A bitch I'll Merk Y.....Fuck It ill let my rhymes finish the sentence-
this rap game you cant get in like a recording studio with no entrance-
^^concept played again in 1st line but still hott 7/10
get hit in the dome Only thing u invented was a maxy pad for your head-
My raps are poisonous shove my pencil in ur arm..ill from the lead-
^^decent closer nice punch 6/10

overall : 32/50 (64%)

M-section..soul skripts..resolve..what other name am i forgetting...?

think your good ? , shiit , open you’re eyes you damn freak.
I`m spitting bars & when I drop
……………………………. He’ll vanish like hide & seek
^^played concept(hide and seek line) decent opener 6/10
I’ve defined ya weak, & you’re pussy - yea so violence’s dope.
Skilled – nah , you’re punches lose taste . . like it's diet coke.
^^lol funny bar nice shyt 7/10
Ya got no respect , you know , your played & always corney
N’ You’re always battling here.
……………………cos you`ve been slaughted outta of tourney
^^good personal and punch 7/10
ya get dg`d if ya fuck wid me, I aint playing no crazy games
kid you should not cheat and stop feeding for days – like david blaine
^^seen stuff similar to david blaine line weak closer 3/10

overall : 23/40 (58%)

vote: killah...overall he had the better verse i think cuz his was more funnier...like a comedy piece good verses from both tho

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