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Old 06-17-04, 06:01 AM   #15
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
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From: inside your nightmare's
IP:

enygma's verse had some nice creativiiity,punches.structure and flow was good...i like the punch about the stretched out lines...but yes you had some nice word play in this verse

DV ur structure was a little ugly from my point of view...punches were decenent...but the gay jokes are mad played...,okey shit man you flowed okay in this,.....but ur puntches didnt hit as hard as enygma's did

v/ enygma-- for harder hittin punches,and a nice structure
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