Loose Canon-Your rhymes was ok I guess, but your structure was way off. I got lost like 5 times. You started out with good punchlines but never really followed through, cause u would change subjects in the middle of a bar. Overall yo rap was below average. Keep at it.
Blackwell- Your structure was real nice. The first line caught me right off the bat that was tight. Loose Canon.........Loose Pussy. Your whole flow not genius, but plenty to beat Loose Canon.
VOTE: Blackwell
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