ite b-more u ripped this kid, his was 2 simple n the rhymes were like so predictable, his structure was good n that was bout it. He needs 2 elevate. Yours were'nt much better just u had better flow n better use of vocab n better comparisons, so my vote goes to B-more. vote on this plz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128911!!