The thing is Im not trying to put you down. Im just trying to point out what I found wrong with the piece. It's still decent, it's just that there are some things wrong with it. Realizing your mistakes and correcting them is the biggest part in elevation, if not, whats the point?
Im just giving constructiove crit. is all.

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and that...is cool.