Spul-You came aight and had some nice punches which
murked some part of it..but mainly you took this becuz
you had more lines which means you have more punches and more
you had some similies and metaphores and strucutre was decent
leaving balance good...

Engyma-You murked it with the 10 lines..you had
some good hard punches and mainly had similies
and metaphores and some nice good personals
But structure wasnt that aight but you didnt really
get this one becuz he had more lines which left him
to have more punches

v/Spul

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