aight my vote goes to rated for a few reasons. i liked ur punches some sounded like fillers but thats ok cause ur flow and structure were good and organized. rush u need to work on harder punches and structure and flow improve those and another tip is to preview ur verse before u post it so there are no errors

v/rated

aight return the favor fellas drop a vote in this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...927#post1350927