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 breakdown for shadow's edge:
 flow:working alright nothing too complex 6/10
 
 volcab:basic stuff i've seen better 5.5/10
 
 punches:a couple of alright personals thrown around my fav line,"But King’s so crooked, even his name and title look shifty"  good job 7/10
 
 overall:18.5/30
 
 breakdown for king solo:
 
 flow:flow alright nothing worse or better then shadow 6/10
 
 volcab:nothing to talk bout really didn't seem to try 5/10
 
 punches:not too much for real solid lines got personal on a few but mainly played ideas my fav,"Pull u outta the shadows edge, see how u react in the sun…" alright job 7/10
 
 overall:18/30
 
 vote--shadow's edge close but not in the way i thought it'd be both didn't seem to try too hard
 
				__________________win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
 
 
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