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Old 06-17-04, 09:14 PM   #19
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:working alright nothing too complex 6/10

volcab:basic stuff i've seen better 5.5/10

punches:a couple of alright personals thrown around my fav line,"But King’s so crooked, even his name and title look shifty" good job 7/10

overall:18.5/30

breakdown for king solo:

flow:flow alright nothing worse or better then shadow 6/10

volcab:nothing to talk bout really didn't seem to try 5/10

punches:not too much for real solid lines got personal on a few but mainly played ideas my fav,"Pull u outta the shadows edge, see how u react in the sun…" alright job 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--shadow's edge close but not in the way i thought it'd be both didn't seem to try too hard
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