i changed my title !!
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breakdown for shadow:
flow:seemed kinda choppy not really workin to be 5/10
volcab:basic array nothing complex 5/10
punches:a couple of alright personal type shit fav line even though he changed his avitar and it doesn't really apply now,"just like his avatar.. fuck j-poll that fucking dickriding fuck......*" overall not too bad 6.5/10
overall:16.5/30 kinda plain and average
breakdown for j-poll:
flow:some nice internal rhyming threw most of it good job 7/10
volcab:a notch above shadow good job 6.5/10
punches:harsh stuff nothing really quotable but you had to of made this kid cry this is the lryical equal to stealing a baby's candy then punches the baby in the head to shut it up. 7/10
overall:20.5/30 good job
vote--j-poll
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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