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Old 06-17-04, 09:26 PM   #12
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for shadow:

flow:seemed kinda choppy not really workin to be 5/10

volcab:basic array nothing complex 5/10

punches:a couple of alright personal type shit fav line even though he changed his avitar and it doesn't really apply now,"just like his avatar.. fuck j-poll that fucking dickriding fuck......*" overall not too bad 6.5/10

overall:16.5/30 kinda plain and average

breakdown for j-poll:

flow:some nice internal rhyming threw most of it good job 7/10

volcab:a notch above shadow good job 6.5/10

punches:harsh stuff nothing really quotable but you had to of made this kid cry this is the lryical equal to stealing a baby's candy then punches the baby in the head to shut it up. 7/10

overall:20.5/30 good job

vote--j-poll
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league