damn ketch jpoll was right u didnt have any real punches.ur verse needs a lota work it sounded like notebook to me no persoanls really and no hard punches flow and structure could use a lota work too but no hate jus keep elevatin.jpoll i liked the thing bout the ring good one and nice punches and personals. good strucuture it was complex but easy to read. flow could use a lil work but good verse solid punches.

v/jpoll

return the favor no hate hit up these battles
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