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Old 06-18-04, 02:47 AM   #16
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flagrant u need to evlevate bad.marvelous had this battle easily. marvilous u had some good metaphors punches and personals.the flow and structure in this battled was bad though
flagrant elevate on usin persoanls and a batter rhyme scheme that rhymin every two words jus killed u

v/marvilous
return the favor on the battle aight no hate pc
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033