Wassup yall this is my first post so im lookin for sum feedback.....

Broadcastin live from the pits of the battle,
soon to be splittin wigs, shake emcees outta they saddle
u'll neva' hear of me losin', shit,
someone'll have ta fix the panel
ask, 'who's eminent?'
son, imma known pirhana
who knows drama, the father of ya whole persona
not yet a vet, but say my name with tha hall of fame,
im hurtin 3rd string playas, first day back in tha game
imma soldier of fortune lost in tha madness,
brandish ya' weapon or get dropped to tha canvas
po' bandit soon to hold tha title single-handed,
most demanded assassin is what i'm branded
far from ya' standards, ob-viously,
plantin jewels in ya' minds, then leavin ya' stranded
yall talkin bout how u each tha m.v.p.'s,
play the front line and i'll strike ya down immediately
a one man hit force, shirt ripped off,
squeeze a full clip ta kill tha bullshit, then dip off

this shits a bit wack but its jus my 1st post...so jus watch and wait.....