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Old 06-18-04, 10:48 AM   #14
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

Mixtape- your struc was off bad...fix that next time...as for your verse...overall it was
good, but you didnt have any personals and your punches tried to diss ketch..but didnt

who's in this bout… The rudeness amounts, contort forms which'll literally have you putting your own fucking foot in your mouth…
this line was alright......but kinda weak
Ketch appearance fucked up seriously…
I hate you already, Throw you off the earth so hard the crust moves like pizza delivery…
this line was ok but you really didnt diss him....more like you hate him
overall: 7.5/10

Ketch- again your overall flow was good....i think your punches hit harder than mixtapes....and since neither of you had personals thats what makes this decison

& Its Plain-ta-seA like J.F.K, Parents Prolly Lames & bitch Cowards
shit... if u was Raised by Muslims, U still couldn't Trade wit dis Tower.
nice line....punch and good use of wordplay

This is ova..dun wit rippin this Gay, time ta spit on ya Grave,
What do think, RB's Dumb, Everyone Know U neva been on ya Name!!!
ha ha......nice punch again

overall: 8/10

vote: Ketch 22