Flyweight
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The Great Harold .:vs:. Shadow Edge
IP:
SHADOW- very nice drop. good structure and flow but you seem to drift of the topic in some places...
"Me n my crew used to ball, pass notes during study hall"
"Overdue for a call, but half of them in Iraq, the first to fall"
dont really know what this has to do with the topic... that's why i say you went of track a bit...
8/10
HAROLD- also very nice drop. and good structure. but this gets my vote because it seems that you stuck to the story and didn't go of track...
9/10
altho shadow had a better flow i give my vote to THE GREAT HAROLD for the story line... nice work by both
vote- THE GREAT HAROLD
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