I agree wit hoops, Ur rymin was not one Id realy be interested in. U did'nt do any real personals, and Ur lines wur to basic, I hate reading shit that sounds like it was written by Run DMC and Big Daddy Kain feel me? Dont be so up tight wit Ur rymes or people'll loose interest in Ur battles and skip U.
Miss. Lyricist did Ok in my View. In most lines she dropped the ball and it land in her mouth though, but it was'nt too bad. Her all out performance needs work too, and if Ur line doesnt ryme, Using a word like man, and huh and all that other shit is not Ok. I remember U said U was from the dirty south were the word crunk is actually in the dictionary but try to make Ur stuff ryme better. It'll take U along way in the futur. as for Tweeza, I expected her to use famouse, Ur masterbate wit Tweeza's punch, but she did'nt, she almost did I guess but she did'nt. any ways, from beginning to the end, Ur verse was Korny and boring. I basically am thinking of reading it to my self just to sleep easier at night. Its better then counting sheeps. Its kewl U keep it real and admit ur knew to this rather than act all smart mouthed like I usually get as U can See. But that isn't included in your verse. all in all U should tryin some one who cant read english or something if U wanna actually win one. Sorry, but yeah it was that bad.

V/ Miss. Lyricist.
P.S. I like Ur name.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..