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Old 06-19-04, 12:02 PM   #8
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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umm okay i seen alot of dumb ass lines from mad dog....kryo ya verse was actually alrite let me explain my shit tho

opener-kryo good punch and ryhme schem...dog dat was ya worst line
structure-a tie
punchlines-kryo
creativty-a tie
multi's-nun of u
personals-dog he had a few
finisher-dog
enjoyed-kryo...ofcourse i think personals is somthin u need in a battle but dogg it look like u went a lil 2 hard lookin 4 about dis dude and datz gay 2 me and u called him out so ya verse could of been written...kryo u got dis dun ya ryhme scheme was nice punches and dat does it 4 me

my vote-kyro
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130367
^^^pleez return da favor ya'll....GON
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