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Old 06-19-04, 02:04 PM   #8
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whao water or what eva that was D/r aiight heres my explained shit

young skeez you came Bangin SON..but i was on the thug shit too before but it dont work in text...like it does but you cant be too hardcore for these kids lol in audios yeah go all out but in hea its not too good to be hardcore gangsta on em...your shit was good but they were stretched,...shortin up your bars a bit...you have the potential to be a vet keep the battles comin dawg fo real....your shit was nice but keep em all in 1 line not 2 lines for 1 line feel me.....your vocab was good..wordplay sick...punches was ILL..personals were hittin.....all around sickness

big bad wolf: yours was aiight nothin special..nothin good..jus elecvate homie youll ge tthere....but really you had bad everything


vote: young skeez

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