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Old 06-19-04, 10:52 PM   #4
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I didn't like either of them

But Illunatic takes this. I agree with Tweeza when he said C needed to work on his structure. The lines were weak, brah, but I see potential.

And you, Ill. *puts on best Mama voice* I know you could do better. But the ending was nice and funny (which I like).

SHOW THE LOVE. VOTE ON MEH BATTLES.
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