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Old 06-20-04, 01:08 AM   #8
Tweeza
New to RB
 
Posts: 66
From: WA
IP:

Whew....Where to start?

Both of ya'll need to elevate, seriously. Punchlines are weak. Work on your structures.

Pimp:

You need to learn how to rhyme and work on your structure.
Overall: 3/10

Big Bad Wolf:

Your verses were okay, not the greatest i've seen from you, you can do better than that.
Overall:6/10

Vote: BBW