the one - Ur verse did'nt capture me and Ur ryme style was a lil off. vocabulary and imagination needs tremendouse work. U cant just say U'll kill some body and thats it these days. niggaz wanna know how Ur gonna do it, maybe when and other shit like that. quik creativity will take U a long way. U did o.k. but if a word rymes and does'nt have any refrence to wat Ur trying to say, the smart thing would be not to use it. there is "ALWAYS" another word that would fit better. An EMCE, is one who'll luk for it.

Lil Scrappy - U did a little better, not good enouf to be praised as U'll see in the next few votes that r to come and probably lead to Ur victory. Ur victory dance line got my laufin though, I was thinkin of niggaz Playin Madden and shit. Im stupid like that, but anyways. the same thing I said to theone, may apply to U and a lot of MCs in this site. U were luky this time, but luk aint gonna stop the next nigga from runnin thru U. ass thes niggaz wud say. U need to elivate.

V/ Lil Scrappy

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..