Flyweight
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Mental Anew .:vs:. Liquor of tear
IP:
L O T- you had a good verse. very indepth with good structure
nice flow throughout and easy to read. the end was very good like
slow death....
9/10
Mental Anew- your verse was very and held a strong storyline thoughout
your ending was very good also. i just feel L O T had a more indepth structure
8/10
nice storys by both on this topic...
vote- Liquor of tear
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