yo i cant vote yet but ima give my oppinion any way. both was aite for some new shit. but ya got some serious elevating to do. if i was you i would start by working on my structure, so you no basically what is gonna be like before you start justwriting aload of shit..
any way i think that overall the wolf took this one cus his was better structured and had an alrite flow. youy both need to work on making it more personal about the person you dissing. pimp keep working on it ull get to the level you wanna be at soon.

vote = wolf
like i said i cant vote yet but if this battle still aint done by the time i get my post up ill come back and hit it..

while you waiting hit gis battle up with a fair vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130569