sup i cant vote yet jus joined yesterday but ill say who i think won and if this battle aint done by the time i get my posts up ill come back and hit it..

big pimpin your verse was aite but you need to start elevating. pick a different structure to use and explore some more vocab. that way your puches will hit better.

red dot your verse was good, nice flow, punches wre good and your verse was structued better. to elevate all you need to do is to concentrate more on ripping the otha person rather than promoting yourself.

unofficial vote = red dot

while ya waiting for soem vote hit this up with a fair vote...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130569