mad man: decent verse...i liked the story behind your words....the whole flow was pretty consistent and the structure was good...word play was good too...wasnt much emotion in your verse....not much depth either it was more simple than it needed to be

overall : 6/10

vango: your verse was probably the best one i have seen in this topical tourney so far....great imagery...you made it feel like you was right there in the story...good plot...structure was decent...some lines were kinda stretched...very nice wordplay and meta's...and the ending was really good...solid piece

overall : 9/10

vote: vango

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