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Mad Man-You had some good ish your lines needed
to continue though.....You had similies and I think
a lil metaphores but Mainly not that much multies
Vango-Yours was good becuz you used your
lines wisely...You had a good topical and I liked
how you worded it...Nice imaginery and pretty good vocab
v/Vango
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