Thread: Torn Apart
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Old 06-20-04, 03:33 PM   #10
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this was good... solid multis carried the flow...

best part was the story... well told with even pacing...

not sure it was mad fire... as far as creative rhymes... not saying the rhymes were bad... they just didn't have much wordplay i guess...

why did you bother posting this here? I dunno...
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Carson, you aren't shit, so don't even post to me again. You suck at audio, you suck at text,and you suck at life. You and I both know that you would have lost 99% of your battles if you didn't have a voting ring and pick on the 9 year olds who join the site.
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