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Old 06-20-04, 03:41 PM   #14
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aight flash that was jus horrible ur punches were weak ur opener wasnt a good one and either was the close u had weak everything jus elevate elevate elevate.deleon i liked it specially the opener bout yao ming and everything bein oppostie good one nice creativity. rest of verse was good i liked it more you usuallyhave better structure but it worked out good anyway.

v/deleon