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New to RB
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IP:
scrappy took this one... just dont put that many multis.. and u need some flow man.. i was sorta lost at ya first 4 lines...
i wont bother depening the wound, ima just add salt//
now your shaken, not stirred, now hurry up and awaken//
look round, your eyes aint blurred, youll see its ya woman ive taken//
ill is it.. those were ur only lines that were good.. your whole verse has to be good not part of it..
anyways vote--
LIL SCRAPPY
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