Banned: Spamming
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Liquor of Tears
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[COLOR=Black][B]But that was so long ago, Before he cut himself free
From the noose that suffocated his reality
The rope mended together by the poisoned sentences
And knotted at the top by his own pennance
Releasing himself from this torture, He can finally breathe
He has opened his eyes to what he should have always seen
Inhaling the actuality of his so called friends
Exhaling his confusion and rage, just quickening the end
ehh i hate rhyming... anyways... get votes in here.
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Those 8 lines were awesome, I loved them. Great work LOT and that last l;ine just made me laugh lol.
Mental had a good verse, I liked the rhymes in his sentence but I didn not enjoy the way he took the topic compared to LoT.
Good Battle
Vpte=LoT
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