wow i didnt expect this much...obviously your not new to rappin this was just hott....i really felt all the wordplay....i think wordplay and multies make an open mic stand out alot more than a verse without them and you definately had them here....good piece all together...and i was feelin the hook that was hott too...out of a 10 i would have to give you a 9.5...and it would have been 10 but your structure was choppy in a couple places but absolutely one of the hottest open mics in a while...
good shyt

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