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New to RV
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IP:
need to elevate ...
first off you're doing text so you have to have it in a format so that people can understand and try to catch the flow. So instead of writing your verses like:
Ur a pussy so im gonna bruze u like kobe did to that girl in colarado its gonna feel like ur gettin hit by motorcycle at full throttle
Make the bars seperate so it looks like this:
Ur a pussy so im gonna bruze u like kobe did to that girl in colarado
its gonna feel like ur gettin hit by motorcycle at full throttle
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You need to up your vocab,rather than using all basic words,it gets borring ...
and make your verse mean something,it just seems like a whole bunch of mess
Read the Tutorials
It'll help you out alot ....
damaged
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