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Old 06-21-04, 12:42 AM   #35
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blak: with all the freeposting you do i thought you would be weak....but your verse was good...only thing really wrong with it was your structure...wasnt feelin that but you had some funny lines in there good meta's and good wordplay...

fave line :
metafours is metafives, dey on anotha level...
im big stonez n boulders dis dude is fruity pebblez

^^lmfao

overall : 8/10

lethal...you came pretty weak you didnt have too many hard punches some were just dumb and some were played...your structure was better than blaq's...but amazingly his verse was more complex...which is a dissapointment cuz your verse looked like it was gonna be hott until i read it....

fave line:
Sorry ass batman, shit I'm a whole fuckin army
u get clowned so much...
...people mistake u for a birthday party!**

^^good shyt and funny

overall : 6.5/10

vote: black

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