most wanted you had an OK verse but it was mostly simple lines and that doesnt win battles you gotta be more complex...you had 1 good punch but besides that you need to elevate alot...use wordplay and multies and meta's and of course personals and harder punches and fix ya structure a little

overall : 4/10

rascal you had a decent verse too...it started out weak but gained momentum and the last 2 bars were sik so good shyt right there...you should use more multies and wordplay too...and also fix ya structure a lil try to make the lines as even as possible
not:

".........................................."
".................................................. ..........................."

that makes the verse lose interest...decent verse

overall : 6/10

vote: rascal

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